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2010年7月21日水曜日

WRITING TEST

I go to Minnesota. I go to university in Minnesota and I do home stay. I go to university on weekday and I spend my host family holiday. I go to shopping with my host family. There is a big shopping center in Minnesota. I will be taking to it. I will buy souvenir in there. I also study in Minnesota. I want to be a fluent speaker of English. I practice at English conversation everyday.

I learn to write by English in this class. I did e-mail with my host family. Thanks to writing classes, I can write sentence by English. When I also go to American, I will think of sentence of English at once. If I don’t speak well, I can also write in a paper.

I want to understand English of American home. Therefore I want to have foreign friends. I will be practice of English conversation what I have foreign friends. After I come back in Japan, I want to reach with them. I will be a friend ever after.


The Lost key


I read this book at last. I tell you about this story.

Kipper wanted a magic adventure but this magic key would not glow. It had not glowed for a long time. He thought that it will maybe glow if he keeps it with him, so he put it in his pocket. Mum had to go shopping. She wanted Kipper to go with her. She wants to get him some new trainers. Kipper forgot he had the key in his pocket. On the way to the shops, Ma\um let Kipper stop and play. He ran to the rocket and the key fell out of his pocket and on to the grass. Kipper looked in his pockets but the key was not there. Kipper wanted to go and look for the key, but Mum would not let him. It had started to rain and Mum wanted to get home. She asks Biff and Chip to look for it. A man came to cut the grass. He cut it with a mower. The mower ran over the magic key with a clang. The man looked the key. The key had broken the mower. Now, he shall have to mend the mower. He was so cross that he threw the magic key in a bin. The boy came to play on the swings. One of the boys looked in the bin and found the key. The boys took the key with them. One of them had some string. He tied the key to the string and spun it round and round. Suddenly, the string broke and the key flew through the air. It hit a greenhouse with a crash and broke the glass. The man angled. The boys ran away as fast as they could. Kipper had to Biff and Chip that he had list the magic key. Wilf and Wilma helped them look for the lost key. Biff asked the man if he had seen it. The man threw it in that bin, but two boys took it out. The children saw the two boys. They asked them if they had found the key. They list it again. They saw the man with the greenhouse. The man sold the key to the junk shop to help pay for the glass. The children went to the junk shop. They told the lady about the key and asked her if she fad it. She has just sold it. The lady told them who had it. She told them that the man had a shop down the street. The children went to the man’s a shop. In the window there were pictures and paintings. Wilma looked inside the shop. It was closed and she couldn’t see the man. They may have to buy the key back so come back to home. Mum went to the shop with the children. She told the man about the key and how Kipper had lost it. She asked it they could have the key back. The man had painted some pictures and had put lots of keys had been painted. The children looked at the pictures but they couldn’t see the magic key. They looked at all the pictures. Suddenly Kipper saw a little picture. It had one key in it. The man told them that they would have to buy the picture. Biff and Chip gave Mum their pocket money, and Mum paid the man. She paid a lot for an old key. The children pulled the key from the picture and rubbed off the paint. Then they looked it. The children wanted the key to glow. Wilma picked it up. But, the key didn’t glow and the magic wouldn’t work. Kipper told the key about the adventures he would like to have. But still the magic wouldn’t work. The next day, Wilf and Wilma came to the house with Nadim and Anneena. The children were sorry about the key. It still wouldn’t glow and they were all very sad. Anneena thought of a good idea. It was what they remind it of the magic adventures. But the key still didn’t glow. At last the children gave up. Mum told Biff and Chip it was time for their friends to go home. Kipper was sorry about the key. He began to cry. Biff and Chip let Kipper take the key to bed. Kipper looked at it for a long time. At last he fell asleep. Suddenly, the magic key began to glow.
This story is strange. I incline ending of the story. I want to have the magic key too. The key is wonderful. If its key glows, how it will be. Kipper is very cute. I want to have a brother like him.
I finished book reviews home work. Every book was interesting. It is easy to read the book by English for me than before.

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2010年7月20日火曜日

Mind Map Outline & Screenshot

my room

  • my TV
    • big
    • clear
      • easy to whtch
    • clean
    • white
  • my computer
    • useful
      • wtach DVD
      • listen to music
    • red
    • NEC
  • my bed
    • comfortable
      • easy to sleep
    • yellow
    • on soft toy
      • big and small
    • wooden
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Brainstorm

My favorite place

・ my room
・university
・my home town
・parco
・aso
・amakusa

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Outline for favorite place: my house

introduction

・ why I choose it


favorite things in my room

・ my TV

・ my computer

・ my bet


conclusion

・ about room


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